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Bob Abner

June 12, 2019

Bob Abner gave feedback on Denim Hearts

A number of nice places lyrically in this one Too much (imho) harmonically “1 - 5 - 6minor” Song needs musical variety, ESPECIALLY when it comes to the bridge. Some nice things in this one. Best wishes in all your musical endeavors!

June 12, 2019

Bob Abner gave feedback on Her Decision

Nice use of Band In A Box!

June 12, 2019

Bob Abner gave feedback on Cold

Would suggest posting the lyrics, as this allows the listener to feel more connected to your song (also makes it easier for others to give feedback in regards to your lyrics). Best wishes in all your musical endeavors.

June 12, 2019

Bob Abner gave feedback on He Gave Her Flowers

Nice sweet story. Vocal intonation often slightly flat. Best wishes in all your musical endeavors.

June 12, 2019

Bob Abner gave feedback on Whiskey & Crow

CLEVER lyric “construct”!!!  (though musically not necessarily down my alley). Brent, best of luck with this one

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