Bob Abner gave feedback on Be Enough

Again, lyrics too generic, no picture painted in the lyrics—paint me some details of a scene (“your heart’s so cold, my teeth are chattering”/“two cigarettes in the ashtray, no fire, burnt out, just like me and you”)—I am not suggesting these specific lines, just give the... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Little Bit of Heaven

P.S. maybe one or two small “touch-ups,” but SHOP THIS SONG!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on You Take Me Away

Hey Shannon, some nice stuff, but I agree with Frank—lyrics meander/generic/didn’t paint any real pictures for me. Best wishes in all of your musical endeavors!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Little Bit of Heaven

WOW!!!  (I RARELY start off my feedbacks with “WOW”) PRODUCTION: Outstanding! LYRICS: Really first-rate (though the last line of the bridge (“I hope you live the best life can in every way, it’s okay”) felt/seemed a little meandering/indirect. MUSICALLY: instrumentally very solid, though a little too... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Happy Birthday My Darling

I stand corrected—I finally WAS able to listen to your song. A little simplistic for my tastes, but I understand why you went in that direction.