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Idea: We're better broken in...our hearts like jeans. Produced by Pearl Snap Studios, Nashville. Thanks for listening!
Thank you for the helpful feedback, Bob. I will keep working on Denim Hearts to liven up the melody! All my best, Alexsi
June 20, 2019
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"Denim Hearts"
V1
Button fly cut-offs, ninety-three degrees, CJ-7 top off, Lord, help me breathe
Sunset fades, face-to-face, stealin’ kisses all over the place
Your hands deep in my pockets, I don't want you to stop it...no…
Chorus
Keep me close, you know me best, denim on denim, chest to chest
From the patches on your jacket to your peekaboo knees
Perfect-pair-fit like a denim dream
So come undone, we might rip at the seams
We're better broken in, denim hearts like jeans
V2
Rock star tee, paint it black, got your blues by the belt loops, a backstage pass
One of a kind, kinda babe, perfect silhouette all fringe 'n fray
My hands deep in your pockets, you don't want me to stop it...no…
Repeat Chorus
Bridge
For the rest of our lives, rock me country-west; it's in our jeans, babe, we got this…
Gimme that boyfriend, curvy, bootleg, skinny, hip-huggin', vintage, high rise, flare...
Repeat Chorus
Denim hearts like jeans…
Your hands deep in my pockets, I don't want you to stop it...
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A number of nice places lyrically in this one
Too much (imho) harmonically “1 - 5 - 6minor”
Song needs musical variety, ESPECIALLY when it comes to the bridge.
Some nice things in this one.
Best wishes in all your musical endeavors!
June 12, 2019
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Thank you for the helpful feedback, Bob. I will keep working on Denim Hearts to liven up the melody! All my best, Alexsi
June 20, 2019
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Bob Abner
A number of nice places lyrically in this one
Too much (imho) harmonically “1 - 5 - 6minor”
Song needs musical variety, ESPECIALLY when it comes to the bridge.
Some nice things in this one.
Best wishes in all your musical endeavors!
June 12, 2019
No members have liked this comment.