Bob Abner gave feedback on You Left

P.S. Like your mother, I am also a pianist (albeit a professional pianist, though you don’t have to hold that against me—HA!). Also, I am sorry that you lost your mom—you hang in there!

Bob Abner gave feedback on You Left

Hi Jolene, a few questions/comments come to mind: 1) A simple question: Do you already have these lyrics set to music, or do you only do lyrics? 2) Several odd places lyrically: End of first verse (rhyme scheme with “melody”)—“Your empty seat now weighs heavily” - maybe “Your empty seat... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on TimeZone

Small point (imho): leave out the added last line of the chorus (“Oh, to my timezone”) until the VERY LAST CHORUS, as that should help a little in punching up the last chorus.

Bob Abner gave feedback on I Got A Glimpse

I enjoyed this song, and think there’s much to like about it—for instance, lots of details in the lyrics. One problem musically—chorus is like the first part of the verse (harmonically, identical). Best wishes in all your musical endeavors.

Bob Abner gave feedback on SILK

Hey Kevin, the song is nice and smooth—however, it feels too generic, both musically and lyrically (especially lyrics in the chorus)—in the end, I came away from the song understanding that there’s a guy and a girl in the song who are (maybe, not sure) in some... Read More