Bob Abner gave feedback on MY FLORIDA HOME

Liked the chorus—the verse (pardon my bluntness) basically just sits there, imho.

Bob Abner gave feedback on KNEE-JERK THINGS

A very nice song. The one suggestion that I might make (an issue that a lot of us who write songs have) is “get rid of the unnecessary small words.” As an example, instead of “It’s as though it was rehearsed,” you might want to think about “As if... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on There Are More Of Us Then There Are Of Them (9-11 Song)

An interesting song—the quality of the vocals is a little like a cross between Tom Waits and Leonard Cohen. Best wishes for your songwriting endeavors!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Paradise

Interesting—slightly reminiscent of a cross between 1) a bunch of Jimmy Buffett songs, and 2) Garth Brooks’ “Two Pina Coladas—which basically gets me back to the basic issue I have with the song—it seems to try (I know this is not necessarily what you were shooting for) to merge... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Reverie

WOW—Dori, thanks for the exceedingly kind words—I have liked the songs of yours that I have listened to so far. Yes, back when I was taking piano lessons, and studying classical music, I have played a number of pieces by Debussy, Alban Berg, and a number of other... Read More