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Bob Abner

August 12, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on WHAT'S IN YOUR HEART

I think this is a really good song—very solid, touches a nice personal spot in the listener’s heart—production is very good—don’t really have anything critical to say about this song—lyrics and music both very solid—I very much enjoyed it!!!

August 12, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on TO KISS YOU ONCE MORE

btw, nice piano, sensitive accompanist, nice arrangement, well-produced!!!

August 12, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on TO KISS YOU ONCE MORE

The bridge (“I wait all day long to dream of you at night…”) is not quite up to the first-rate level of the verses (“Take all my possessions…), imho, but this is a SMALL quibble—I think this song is first-rate—I am glad you write songs, because I think... Read More

August 12, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on REVISIT ALL OF THIS

Pretty solid—the only small thing I noticed is the pause between “Surrendered innocence” and “Your intoxicating kiss” seemed a little too long and a little awkward. I do think this is a good song.

August 12, 2018

Bob Abner gave feedback on MY HOMETOWN

1) Verse and chorus musically too similar to each other. 2) Musically, a little too predictable. 3) Nice key change. 4) Nice evocative lyrics.

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