Joined: July 20, 2018
Bob Likes: 19 Songs
Bob Abner gave feedback on TO KISS YOU ONCE MORE
btw, nice piano, sensitive accompanist, nice arrangement, well-produced!!!
Bob Abner gave feedback on TO KISS YOU ONCE MORE
The bridge (“I wait all day long to dream of you at night…”) is not quite up to the first-rate level of the verses (“Take all my possessions…), imho, but this is a SMALL quibble—I think this song is first-rate—I am glad you write songs, because I think... Read More
Bob Abner gave feedback on REVISIT ALL OF THIS
Pretty solid—the only small thing I noticed is the pause between “Surrendered innocence” and “Your intoxicating kiss” seemed a little too long and a little awkward. I do think this is a good song.
Bob Abner gave feedback on MY HOMETOWN
1) Verse and chorus musically too similar to each other. 2) Musically, a little too predictable. 3) Nice key change. 4) Nice evocative lyrics.
Bob Abner gave feedback on WHAT'S IN YOUR HEART
I think this is a really good song—very solid, touches a nice personal spot in the listener’s heart—production is very good—don’t really have anything critical to say about this song—lyrics and music both very solid—I very much enjoyed it!!!