Bob Abner gave feedback on Pump the Brakes

A lot to like about this song (lead vocals, band, production, fairly clever lyrics, musically pretty catchy, etc.) One thing that put me off a little: I thought it was (chord-wise) awkward moving out of the instrumental section into “What we can’t undo, we can move on past”—you... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Seen And Heard

1) Just curious—why didn’t you post the lyrics here—that often helps to draw the listener in (as they follow along on the lyrics while they listen to the song). 2) I think this is quite nice—production outstanding, vocals quite good, lead guitar sounds first-rate, song interesting, both musically... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Earth Bound Angel

Just curious—why didn’t you include the lyrics, so listener can follow along as he/she listens to your song?

Bob Abner gave feedback on Expecting A Miracle

1) A bunch about this to like (Nice vocals, lyrics are solid, the song gets your attention, etc.) 2) However, on the bridge—imho, the chords need to change — | Dm   F/C | Bflat     F/A | Gm sus7   |Csus7 C7 | — this set of chord changes is to chord movement... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on The Rescue Plan

I agree!  Basically the whole song sits on the same energy level; sadly (imho) this means the song doesn’t reach out and grab the listener nearly as much as it could (because there are some very nice things happening musically and lyrically in this song). I DO think... Read More