From version 1 feedback (http://frettie.com/track_detail/1786)!
- Guitar solo shortened; even guitar Gods like Paisley just do 20 seconds
- 2nd bridge removed
- Verse 2 adds a bit of context, so hopefully sounds less psychopathic ![]()
- Re-sung
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This one arose from the "Building a Hit" course on Frettie - one of the audience participation parts was think of what song might go with "What You Don't Know" and I got this idea. I wrote it, but then after writing it changed it from "you" to "she" (though "he" will work as well) so that the song wasn't directed at the listener ![]()
This time around, had to add in a solo as haven't done that in a bit, and had fun with some "angry bass"!
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A song that describes many ex-wives
Rough mix only at this stage, this song had a very Dire Straits feel, with a Van Morrison vocal approach. A co-write Ross Hemsworth & Robi Bevan (Copyright January 2018)
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