Bob Abner gave feedback on Cheap Canadian Whiskey

Again, interesting—I DO think you are talented (both as a singer and as a songwriter), and you’re “easy on the eyes”—put those together and it’s a “nice package”—2 small things I would mention: 1) On this song (haven’t noticed it so much in your other songs... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Anyway

OK, I like the “semi-minimalist” feel—piano is a little “bangy” in spots—GREAT vocals (intonation, vocal timbre, strength)—you might try pitching your songs to Sarah Bareilles

Bob Abner gave feedback on Make My Heart

Haydee Ahrens, thanks for the listen and for the compliments and feedback. You mentioned the two “returns”—The reason for the second “returns” is to establish the new key in the key change, not just with the chords, but also melodically. btw, best wishes with your songwriting endeavors!

Bob Abner gave feedback on The Losing Game

Shades of Steely Dan—interesting subject matter—nice production/arrangement—Quite solid, if you ask me!!!  Best wishes for all your musical endeavors!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Favourite Empty

NICE SONG! Vocalist does a nice job. I’d think about trying to shop this to Huey Lewis—the arrangement (horn parts especially) are pretty stiff—but I am guessing that you probably didn’t have the money to actually have this demoed with first rate arranger and musicians. But... Read More