Bob Abner gave feedback on Big Tall Man

imho, a little too “formulaic” (patterned) for my taste—hear a small bit of Harry Chapin influence—good subject matter (particularly for those of us who have dads we fondly remember, though they are no longer with us). Best wishes in all your songwriting endeavors.

Bob Abner gave feedback on Say

1) You have a pleasing voice and 2) your vocal intonation is pretty solid—enunciation if problematic (your vowels sound good, but initial and final consonants in words get somewhat lost, so it makes it more difficult to make out your lyrics)—wish you had included the lyrics with your song. Piano... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on In the Shadow of the Son

imho, pretty standard EARLY southern gospel—seems that southern gospel these days is often a little bit more “musically adventurous” (again, imho)—best wishes in your songwriting endeavors!

Bob Abner gave feedback on As Ezra

fwiw, you might think about practicing your songs along with a “click track,” which will keep a constant pulse going—your rhythm and timing will improve, as it forces you to play and sing along with a constant rhythm—it will immediately show you what places in your songs are... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Shame On Me

Marvin, once again, very solid lyrics. One thing that caught my attention—in the verses, you have two empty measures (no lyrics) in each line—I may be the only person that notices that, but (in a small way) it was a little offputting—and again, the rest of the... Read More