Joined: May 9, 2017
Richard Likes: 9 Songs
Richard Kirk gave feedback on I CAN HEAR HER HUMMING
Hi Laramie: Laramie: I love it when I hear a really different way of expressing a common theme, and this does that. as was said, a little more detail, illustration, etc. would be helpful. Also, Just my opinion, on “the fat lady” line I would put the strong rhythmic... Read More
Richard Kirk gave feedback on Old Friend
Great job Marvin as usual. Always enjoy your songs. Very touching. Only a very minor comment about” on that you can depend” that’s not conversational to reverse the phrase like that. Otherwise a very well told poignant tale. RK
Richard Kirk gave feedback on Whatever That Was
Love it, so well told. Can see everything, great images. Singer sounds a lot like Eric Church for what that’s worth. Anyway, only minor thing, as far as using Austin, that sometimes get overused, like just was in “Hotel Key” and maybe some others. Not... Read More