Richard Kirk gave feedback on Let’s Go (work tape)

Nice effort here. I also loved the dashboard Jesus line. the only minor change I would suggest is not using the same “ire” words as end rhymes in the third verse as you did in the first verse.  My ear wanted to hear different rhyme sounds by then.  ... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on ANOTHER TEAR JERKER

Well if this is a great honky tonker I don’t know what is. Says exactly what you want it to. Craft wise there could be a little more interesting way to say things here and there. You use “night” in both the verse and Ch, for example.  I... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Livin’ It Up

I always like everything I;ve heard of yours Marvin. I’m not sure exactly what no prisoner kind of love means, though, a little vague to me. just my opinion. Honestly I don’t know if you even need a bridge on this one.  But it is a... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Blood Red

Your story telling is very clear and direct, you’ve done a great job here.  It may not be the first time the type of story has been done, but you’ve painted such vivid pictures and I think accomplished what you wanted to do.  Now I’m... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Southern Life

Hey Roger. Some really descriptive lines here, a subject that’s been done many times, so it’s gonna be kind of hard to break through. But I don’t think that well ever completely runs dry.  I like what you’re saying overall, but I’d like to... Read More