Richard Kirk gave feedback on Be On Your Best

Hi Bobby; I know so many people listen and never say anything, which I think should be better,so here goes.  Overall, I like what you’re saying here, simple and straightforward. My main comments are reversed way of saying things, like “too many folks to I’ve lied”... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Freeze Summer

Hi. This is a good way of trying to say a common theme a little differently, so that’s a real plus.  Visuals are good, bonfire, hands in the air, etc. Easy to follow and great demo. You used the same rhyme sounds in both verses, night, light, etc.... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Love Like The Stars

I like the twist on the star thing, and beat/groove is obviously catchy/hooky, But the way the ends of words that normally are not accented are accented grates at me.  BonNEE, JacKEE,  etc.  Ok so I’m a dinosaur, proud to be one, card carrying.... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Forget About You

Hi James. This chord progression and feel/and maybe melody is just like the Commodores “I’m easy” in the 70’s.  I know that’s a long time ago,different genre. May not make much difference now, it’s just I’ve run into this on my stuff more... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Love Two Point oh

thanks! appreciate it