Richard Kirk gave feedback on Cowboys and Indians

Mike: I really like the idea, and it’s so descriptive, I can’t say anything negative there. At times I thought the verses were a little too similar melodically to the CH, (the level where CH started) Also, I thought CH could have been varied a little more rhythmically.... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on 3 Drinks Into You

Hi. Very descriptive here, I really like this overall, I love Bar stool beauty, fruity line.  You do very well with your pictures. My only suggestion is that I don’t hear 3 drinks into you as the title. It’s a good one, but as is, Im getting over... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on What Did I Do?

hi howard: I think the overall theme of the story is fine, but there are a few things. In the first verse the rhymes are all oo And I think you use the word you a little too much. rhymes.  Finally in my opinion, I’m not sure you... Read More

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Love at First Flight

thanks for your comments!

Richard Kirk gave feedback on Healed in Heaven

thanks frank, I appreciate your comments