Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Sister of the Girl Next Door

Guys, maybe it’s just me, but I don’t get the “sister” connection.  Don’t get me wrong, “sister of the girl next door” rolls off the tongue easily and sounds good, but from a lyric perspective, I don’t get it.  Their not related, not sorority... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on The Sweetest

Amber, I am interested on your take for the “drag my tongue” line.  Do you feel it’s too much, doesn’t fit the song, degrading in some manner?  I’d bet we’ve all done it at some point.  We were trying to write to push... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on I Didn't Know

Amber… the 1st verse isn’t easy to follow. Easier to follow like this: You text me, say you’re coming over I should look out my window You left flowers on my Rover Who is saying “love that feeling”, you or him? Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Low Country High

Keith, this is a nice song.  Not sure there’s an audience for it outside the “low country”, but bet if you play it locally, it gets a great response.  Definitely got that laid back feel to it.  Nothing really jumps out at me lyric or music... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Are You Listening?

Brent, thank you for your thoughts and ideas. I had written these lyrics over a year ago as an experiment in the VVBV format.  I usually have a melody and music going through my head as I’m writing, but on this one, I kept finding myself singing to... Read More