Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Lipstick Red MBZ

Okay… I dig it.  It has a nice bouncy melody and sounds a little different than what’s currently playing on the radio.  It’s got that “Carrie” kind of vibe to it, but feel it needs a few tweaks here and there. Your syllable count in the... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Here’s The Thing

Keith, I know this song is personal to you, but here are some random thoughts. I think you’re putting too many ideas into the song.  You’ve got 8 lines for the homesite, then 8 lines on the kids.  At this point, I’m still not sure what the... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Hypnotized

Amber… I had a thought for this one… if you’re interested. What if you shifted the focus from your guy being “hypnotized” by his phone to you becoming “invisible” to him?  The phone is just one of the reasons.  He’d rather watch the game then spend... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Lipstick Red MBZ

Hi Kris!  Welcome to Frettie! This sounds like a fun, bouncy song, but would love to see the lyrics rather than trying to figure them out.  If you login and choose the song, you can add the lyrics under “edit song details”, then copy and paste them in. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Hypnotized

Hey Amber!  Glad to see you’re still working on this one.  Personally, I think I like the feel and vibe of the music in your first version better, but that’s just me. Since you’ve gone to shorter and choppier lyrics, you have to paint mental... Read More