Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on You Can Count On Me

Hi Marvin, I think I’ve finally listened to all of your songs (a couple of them wouldn’t play).  Out of all of them, I believe this one is my favorite.  Maybe because it’s the closest to sounding like what’s currently on the radio. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on When we take time out

Hey Chris… Welcome to Frettie! I have a few thoughts on this song, in no particular order, so bear with me… In general, if you’re not going to have a chorus, you need a couple lines of refrain at the end of each section to keep the listener grounded,... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on It Won't Stop

Welcome to Frettie! On first listen, I’m not sure if the title should be “It Won’t Stop” or “‘Til You Let it Go”.  It sounds very good, but would love to see the lyric sheet. You can add the lyrics by logging in, going to the song,... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on The Sweetest

Amber, thank you so much for your thoughts.  I have the line “Taste the sweetness of your lips” as a backup for that one. Michael, I couldn’t tell you what current R&B or hip-hop sounds like… not in my wheelhouse. Thanks for the input, Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on That Smile

When I first listened, I wasn’t keen on the triplet “when I see that smile”, but the more I listen to it, it’s kind of grown on me.  Would love to see the lyric sheet.  You can add it by logging in, going to the song,... Read More