Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Older Whiskey

Joseph, thank you for your honest feedback.  I wish more people people would just say what they think… good or bad!  It always amazes me how a song can be viewed a hundred times, yet nobody has an opinion on it! Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Legacy

Nice idea and concept, but think you could go a little deeper on the legacy you want to leave. Lyric wise, I think I’d switch around the pre-chorus and first part of the chorus.  I think it flows better that way. Keep writing! Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Deja Vu

Amber, I think this is the best song you’ve written, and your singing is getting better.  Might have just been your voice, but I was imagining it being sung on The Voice or some other talent show. My only suggestion is to add another “deja vu” after the “... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Close To Tears

Hi Mike!  Interesting phrasing of the verses, it got my attention, but the lack of a recurring rhyme scheme kept me guessing what came next.  I don’t know if you did it on purpose for feeling, but making the verses ABCB structure wouldn’t be that hard. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Twenty Seven (with pic and lyrics)

Tom, I think you have an interesting idea for a song, but way too many “10,000” references, as it makes the verses the focus and not the chorus.  I kept waiting for the 10,000 somethings to see what would be next. Now, I’m no expert in the folk genre, and... Read More