Rick Lane gave feedback on say the words

Beautiful song. Excellent recording. Really professional sounding with every aspect of it, from lyric, melody, vocals, mix, etc. Really great sounding.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Come on home

I really like those suggestions from Linne. Those two lines: “Mistakes were made, so burn those bridges I’ll help you find some new beginnings” are pretty cool sounding. And bridges/beginnings is a near rhyme that’s not a real close near rhyme, but very nice sounding. They roll... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Evil Ways

Hello Harold, Thanks for posting your song. I’ll give my very unprofessional, amateur critique-er thoughts. Lol… My first reaction, I instantly hear “I turned 21 in prison, doin’ life without parole”. This definitely has a Mama Tried kind of vibe to it. In fact, in your song, Mama and Daddy... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on How Far

Hi Chad, Really nice sounding song, and a really nice sounding demo. If you recorded all of this in your home recording studio, I am JEALOUS. Sounds really good. Really nice melody. Great production. If that’s you singing, you got a great voice. Kind of Keith Urban sounding…. In... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Smoke 'n Mirrors

Great song. Beautiful melody. Great sounding demo. Really song. In reading through the lyrics (without music), I couple of things caught my attention. Really nice references to smoke and fire, and mirror and glass. “There’s no escaping, I took a dangerous line/What if I can’t find a... Read More