Rick Lane gave feedback on I Just Need You (Lyrics Only)

Thank you for sharing your opinion from a woman’s perspective, Linne. You make really good points about this subject, and how female and male artists may react when imagining them as the artist that would have to perform a song like this.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Runaway Train

Good song. Good melody. Good message. Really nice chord change and melody on that second line of the chorus. That hooked me in good. Killer sounding demo. I am jealous of that demo. Great job.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Make My Daddy Proud

Thank you very much, Mike! I really appreciate that. I wouldn’t say great voice though. Lol. Serviceable? Workable maybe? If you know anything about recording and mixing, a lot of comping and overdubs, and autotune. Lol. But aside all that, I really appreciate your kind words. I look forward... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on I Just Need You (Lyrics Only)

Thank you, Linne. You made some great points. You know, you pointed out that “difficult” line and men being vulnerable, and it reminded me. I originally wrote this song from a woman’s perspective. I guess I kind of forgot, but I originally wrote this for a friend’s band... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on A Little Nudge

Nice song, Richard. It’s a cute song. Both verses work with that title and hook. The only thing that caught my attention was that third line in the chorus, “Once I got started, I found it wasn’t all that tough”. For instance, would Molly be offended at the... Read More