Rick Lane gave feedback on That's Our Sound ver 2

Hello Xave, I’m returning the favor since you were nice enough to offer feedback on one of my songs. I gotta start off saying that my favorite part, hands down, is that “hey diddle diddle, got a banjo and a fiddle”. Love that line! Personally, I think the word “... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on Sleepless Nights

Hello Xave!, Thank you very much! That’s exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for with this website. I agree on the verses being too dynamic. At the very least, the first part of the first verse. I thought the same thing. I need to start minimally, and... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on One Afternoon In Heaven

Post-Bucket List. That’s clever! Lol. I hope yu got some song starts ready to go when you head off for that co-write! Thanks again for sharing your song with us, and for sharing your knowledge with us.

Rick Lane gave feedback on Talkin’ To God

Great song. Sounds great. Great demo and production for the music and melody… When I read the lyrics, even without the music, the lines all read so smooth. The lines roll off the tongue easily. I like that about your lyrics… The verses have the great imagery. I can see... Read More

Rick Lane gave feedback on One Afternoon In Heaven

Once again, it’s humbling to read your lyrics, Brent. It’s a reminder of how much I still have to learn, and how high the bar is, but I appreciate you posting your songs for us all to try to learn from… Just reading the lyrics to this song ... Read More