Bob Abner gave feedback on Cliches

Hey Sam—imho, the thing I notice is that if you’re gonna go with these lyrics (dealing with common place “cliches”), you might want to shoot for a “music bed” that really has some “lovely life” in the accompaniment to your words. As it is, the lyrics and the... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Start All Over Again

Reid, oonce again, thanks for the compliments, and I’m glad you liked it!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Just Like That, Only Better

Reid, thanks for the compliments—glad you liked it!!!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Texas Red White and Blue

Sorry, this may just be me, but the synthesized fiddle is very offputting—the lead guitar is pretty solid—if you can’t get an actual fiddle player, you might just let the guitar player cover the fills. Overall. fairly nice—a little odd (musically) getting into your bridge!

Bob Abner gave feedback on Made Me Believe

Hey Kristina, the things I notice: the whole song has sort of a “run-on feel”—in other words, musically the verse sorta runs into the “pre-chorus” which basically runs into the chorus. The different parts of a song should be distinct from one another. I WOULD keep the G/A—... Read More