This song is a tribute to all the Heroes of Hurricane Harvey and the great State of Texas.
Any feedback is welcome!
Sorry, this may just be me, but the synthesized fiddle is very offputting—the lead guitar is pretty solid—if you can’t get an actual fiddle player, you might just let the guitar player cover the fills. Overall. fairly nice—a little odd (musically) getting into your bridge!
August 24, 2018
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Texas Red White and Blue
V1 Bikers helping preachers at a nearby shelter
Lawyers grilling burgers for 1st responders
Lost puppy shivers in a homeless man’s arms
Accidental heroes in a deadly storm
CH Come Hell or high water we stand together
One star in our red, white and blue
Don’t matter where you’re from
Who you are or what you’ve done
The Lone Star stands for me and you
‘Cause we’re all one in our Texas red white and blue
V2 Sirens tuning up like fiddles in the distance
Choppers whipping rivers searching for victims
Love’s spreading faster than a viral connection
People helping people like true blue Texans
CH: Repeat
Lead Break:
BR: A Texas heart don’t hesitate
It’s now or never or too late
To reach out with a helping hand
CH: Repeat
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Hi Kristina,
You described very nicely the situation, how in an emergency all people stand together. I think that’s what makes us human, whether in Texas or in other parts of the world.
August 24, 2018
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Sorry, this may just be me, but the synthesized fiddle is very offputting—the lead guitar is pretty solid—if you can’t get an actual fiddle player, you might just let the guitar player cover the fills. Overall. fairly nice—a little odd (musically) getting into your bridge!
August 24, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Kristina,
You described very nicely the situation, how in an emergency all people stand together. I think that’s what makes us human, whether in Texas or in other parts of the world.
August 24, 2018
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