Joined: July 20, 2018
Bob Likes: 19 Songs
Bob Abner gave feedback on Diamonds and Pearls
1) Vocal intonation—TOO flat TOO often. 2) Meter in verse seems a little stiff. 3) Key change is awkward (not natural, no flow). Best wishes in your future songwriting endeavors.
Bob Abner gave feedback on He Knows it All
Reminds me a little of the group The Wilkinsons (a really nice musical group). Very sweet!
Bob Abner gave feedback on He Knows it All
Really very nice!!! This is the song of yours that jumps out the most at me. I knew from the first few notes that this one is VERY SOLID, VERY GOOD!!!
Bob Abner gave feedback on Farm Hands
btw, are Chris’ and Jaron’s fortes more on the side of lyrics or music?