Just a happy love song..featuring PDAs lol
mix, songwriting,any
Hey Shannon, some nice stuff, but I agree with Frank—lyrics meander/generic/didn’t paint any real pictures for me.
Best wishes in all of your musical endeavors!
June 12, 2019
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Baby Baby- must be our lucky day
The sun is shinin' -ain't nothin in the way
You got me feelin' -I've been swept away
Like an ocean- crushin' like a wave
PC
You already had my heart
Oh you- already had my love!!
CHORUS
But-B-baby, just take my hand- let em see what we're doing
Catch me- if you can- let's make this love brand new and
Who cares, I say, go with this feeling baby
Some stare- so kiss me, ohhhh
You take me away -ahhhh
You take me away -ahhhh
I'm not one for - roller coaster rides
I like fun but- fun that makes me smile
Then you whisper - naughty in my ear
You got me rollin- I forgot all my fear
PC
You already had my heart
Oh you- already had my love
CHORUS
But B-baby, just take my hand- let em see what we're doing
Catch me- if you can, let's make this love brand new and
Who cares?I say- go with this feelin' baby
Some stare -so kiss me-ohhhh
You take me away-ahhhh
You take me away- ahhhh
BRIDGE
Oh babe you're kissin me like cotton candy
til i'm gone
I wonder if they still remember how it feels to be in love
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH
CHORUS TO END
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Hey Shannon, nice catchy feel good song with clear structure, the chorus settles down well. Your voice is strong and present. Reminds me of ‘Four non Blondes’. The sound is pretty good. The only thing I would criticize is that the lyrics are a bit too generic. There is nothing that stands out, no story, no cool hook, nothing original. But otherwise very good work!
June 11, 2019
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Hey Shannon, some nice stuff, but I agree with Frank—lyrics meander/generic/didn’t paint any real pictures for me.
Best wishes in all of your musical endeavors!
June 12, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hey Shannon, nice catchy feel good song with clear structure, the chorus settles down well. Your voice is strong and present. Reminds me of ‘Four non Blondes’. The sound is pretty good. The only thing I would criticize is that the lyrics are a bit too generic. There is nothing that stands out, no story, no cool hook, nothing original. But otherwise very good work!
June 11, 2019
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