Bob Abner gave feedback on Happy Birthday My Darling

King Dadu, just wanted to give you a heads-up—I was NOT able to listen to this song—could listen to all the rest of the songs, but for some reason, couldn’t listen to this song of yours—which may well be why there are no responses/feedbacks so... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Four Letter Words

Would simply suggest that when you post your songs, you also post the lyrics, as many folks want to follow the words along as they’re listening to your song (it seems to help the listener “access” the song better (get closer to internalizing the song). Best wishes with your... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on Old Friend

Nice job of storytelling, as always. One small critique—chord changes a tad bit awkward in a few spots (for instance, at the beginning of the line “Old friend I’m glad I had a chance of knowin’ you”)—anyway, nice and straightforward narration of a long friendship.

Bob Abner gave feedback on When You're Leaving (Acoustic Rough Draft)

I agree with Frank (slight Simon & Garfunkel flavor). I like the lyric, though it may be a bit “soft” for this hard-edged world we seem to inhabit. Lyrically, wish the chorus was a little more “direct” and less “soft like the clouds” (maybe a little more “standing in contrast... Read More

Bob Abner gave feedback on No One Knows

Lyrically, a “mixed message”—“Tell us about the things he did” vs. “But now it’s time for you to let it be” Musically, strictly 1 - 4 - 5 chords and the sort of “sing-songy” melody all the way through it seem to give it a fairly superficial musical setting, imho. Nice... Read More