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I Got A Glimpse

Lora Stamps

April 23, 2019

Genre: Country

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This is one of those nostalgic songs about some of the best days of my life.

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Lora, in all aspects very well crafted song with nice images. You describe your memories, but from a distance, the song could be stronger if you would show us your feelings, when you see these pictures from the past.

April 29, 2019

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Lora Stamps

Frank, I appreciate your opinion and input. I’m not really sure how to express the images and emotions without the song being too long. Would welcome your suggestions. I can work on the lyrics but not being a vocalist or instrumentalist it’s more involved for me to do a rewrite.
Thank you so much!!

April 29, 2019

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Frank Renfordt

Got you! thought it was you singing. Don’t get me wrong - it’s a nice song. But just keep in mind for your next song to dig deeper into your emotions. As songwriter we grow with every song - the best is yet to come - LOL. I have written a similar song, it was one of my earlier songs you’ll find it here -  it’s called ‘Mount Everest’ would like to hear what you think about it.

May 01, 2019

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Bob Abner

I enjoyed this song, and think there’s much to like about it—for instance, lots of details in the lyrics. One problem musically—chorus is like the first part of the verse (harmonically, identical).

Best wishes in all your musical endeavors.

June 12, 2019

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I Got A Glimpse

Written by Lora Stamps

I'm staring in the distance looking like I'm in a daze       
And I see grandmother and granddaddy's old home place      
I see the front porch and those steps that led up there       
cousins are in the yard and there's family everywhere       
and out by the garden past the crepe myrtle tree       
I'm always running my sister's with me     
Chorus:       
It's those scenes in my mind from other days      
that stayed and now they play and they play         
And I remember them some are vivid some are dim         
Oh but today I got a glimpse       

Sometimes I see daddy walking down the steps of that jet        
that brought him home from war a proud American Vet     
And I'll get a flash of mama when I was a kid      
before a wrinkle ever touched her smooth skin       
And I see my children playing in the rain
That day I threw all their little muddy clothes away         
and sometimes they are babies and I am holding them        
oh and today I got a glimpse
Chorus:   
It's those scenes in my mind from other days          
that stayed and now they play and they play         
And I remember them some are vivid some are dim          
Oh but today I got a glimpse

Bridge:       
Sometimes all it takes is a little sun on my face to stir up a memory   
Or a summer afternoon when the sky is pink and blue         
I could think of most any good thing         

Like the first time I rode my bike and didn't fall down           
Or there I am with a young boy saying wedding vows           
And just like it was yesterday in our old family car           
Or the moment when I let Jesus in my heart                          
Chorus:           
It's those scenes in my mind from other days          
that stayed and now they play and they play           
and I remember them some are vivid some are dim                                 
Oh, but today I got a glimpse!                              
Oh, today I got a glimpse.
I'm staring in the distance looking like I'm in a daze.  

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Frank Renfordt

Hey Lora, in all aspects very well crafted song with nice images. You describe your memories, but from a distance, the song could be stronger if you would show us your feelings, when you see these pictures from the past.

April 29, 2019

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Lora Stamps

Frank, I appreciate your opinion and input. I’m not really sure how to express the images and emotions without the song being too long. Would welcome your suggestions. I can work on the lyrics but not being a vocalist or instrumentalist it’s more involved for me to do a rewrite.
Thank you so much!!

April 29, 2019

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Frank Renfordt

Got you! thought it was you singing. Don’t get me wrong - it’s a nice song. But just keep in mind for your next song to dig deeper into your emotions. As songwriter we grow with every song - the best is yet to come - LOL. I have written a similar song, it was one of my earlier songs you’ll find it here -  it’s called ‘Mount Everest’ would like to hear what you think about it.

May 01, 2019

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Bob Abner

I enjoyed this song, and think there’s much to like about it—for instance, lots of details in the lyrics. One problem musically—chorus is like the first part of the verse (harmonically, identical).

Best wishes in all your musical endeavors.

June 12, 2019


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