Dick Plunk gave feedback on Heaven Couldn't Wait

Ted - It’s good to hear some of your songs after all these years. This is a sweet, well constructed, country song with a very strong chorus. I really liked the melody and the production, as well. My only input is that I think you weakened the message in... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on That’s Love

Dennis, I think you have something going here. I think the short phrases in the verse combined with the refrain “that’s love, that’s love” works very well. However, I think you have 3 bridges already. A chorus is usually a musical/lyrical section which repeats (and sums up the... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Blacktop Ballroom

Meaghan, I hope you remember me from the EspressoYourself Music Cafe open mike. This is great - good hook, tremendous visuals, sweet melody. memorable chorus. I also think you did a really good job of supporting your hook with almost every line. But, of course, I was won over the... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Brace Myself

Phillippe, I think there are a lot of good things in this song. It has a haunting quality which I think works very well. I would make 2 suggestions: 1) I do think that musically it needs a break in the middle to keep it from becoming monotonous. It wouldn’t take... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on By My Side

Willie, Two things I really liked: the refrain in this sounds like a Beatles song - very pretty. The melody is very pleasant to listen to. What bothered me is that all you have said is: “things have worked out as we planned”. Though you say it several different ways,... Read More