Dick Plunk gave feedback on Baby I'm Gone

Dave, Of course, I’ve heard this many, many times and have loved it from the beginning. The visuals are great and the melody is really good. Maybe I’m biased, but I’d rather hear you sing and play it versus the demo. I think your groove and vocal... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Sentimental Way

Interesting structure - I think you have verse, half a chorus, bridge, verse, and full chorus. While I think this is okay, I think most listeners look forward to the repetition of the chorus (something familiar and that they might sing along with). By doing a half chorus and then... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Willy Don't Need No Shoes

Benny - First - thanks for the feedback you gave me on some of my songs. I appreciate it. I also think this is a fun song. In fact, I’d bet that it’s a great jam song when you play it with others. Even though, it is just... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Dont Leave

Orion - this has a beautiful melody and is really well produced. I particularly like the mandolin chords in the background in stategic places. I think this song could be stronger and more universal in appeal if it had stronger story. (Recognize that I may be missing something because there... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on After All

I’m pretty much a fan of everything you do. This is no exception. Very nice melody, plus I enjoy the sentiment. A couple of things to think about: 1) the phrasing of the last line of each verse, to me, felt awkward. 2) the line “although I can’t be there... Read More