Dick Plunk gave feedback on The Weather

This is such a cool song!  I don’t understand it all, but that is some of the appeal for me. It’s also unique in that the only rhyme is in the chorus, but I think it works. Personally, I would not mess with the production very much.... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Little Old Me

Another good song by Lachelle. You paint really nice pictures with your lyrics. And I think you did a good job of describing someone who knows it’s over, but deep, deep inside holds onto hope that there is still something there. You made me believe the emotion. My only... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Suffocator (revised)

I think what you have done with this (taking it from a simple vocal/guitar recording to a studio version with strings and harmony) is very good. I agree with Adam, your voice is beautiful on this. And since music is personal taste, I have to say I like the... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on The Safer

Adam, I love the easy, lazy feel of this. I also think your voice is perfect for this song (Of course! You wrote it.) The only thing that I missed was the almost total lack of rhyme. To me, it was noticeable enough, that when you got to the “out... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Let It Be Amazing

Jaime - like it! Really nice chorus. The only thing I would suggest is to not use the same word to end a line in a row (eg: “sitting there”, “apart”, “sitting here”).  I think when you used the “we’d say/we’d do/we’d feel” pattern,... Read More