Joined: June 7, 2013
Dick Likes: 50 Songs
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Long Time to be Nowhere
Charlie, Nice. This truly has an anthem feel to it with the simple, low key start, which builds to a climatic end. I really liked it. I think it stands on its own and don’t have any suggestions for improvement. But I would encourage you to put your... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on From The Outside In
This is a cool tune. I love the simplicity of the structure and the melody contrasted with the seriousness of the subject matter. I really have nothing to critique. I think this song works as is. Nice job.
Dick Plunk gave feedback on I'm Selling Out
Jeff, I love everything you write. Your world perspective, and way of expressing it, are so clever. This song is no exception - very clever (especially your last verse!). The only input I would provide is that I think the chorus would be stronger and more listenable if you did... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Tail Lights
Jamie, I like a lot about this song, but do find the structure troubling. I think, in country music, listeners like to have that chorus come around, at least a couple of times (something familiar to anticipate). My suggestion would be this: I would make your chorus be the “As... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Imperfect
Such a cool, simple song. And your hook line (“it’s perfect how imperfect you are”) is really clever. I really like your music.