Dick Plunk gave feedback on Too Pretty

Nice melody and feel to this song. But the whole song, I kept asking: “why?”. Your lyric says: “you’re too pretty, too innocent for me. You walk away.” But you gave us no key to the back story which would make you sing these words. I think it could... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on Connoisseur of Sorts

I’ve heard most of your songs and this is a really interesting departure from your normal style. I really love the haunting feel of it. I know that “connoisseur of sorts” is a neat line, but I think the real theme of your song (which is usually what your... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on In the Glow of the Bug Zappers Blue Light

Your songs are rich with visuals, but this one is really cool (and fun). The song has 2 other things going for it: 1) a dead skunk in the first line (they always say to open with a line that grabs everyone’s attention), and 2) a banjo (what song isn’t better... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on A Hard Lesson Learned

Dennis, It would be easier to comment on content if you could post the lyrics. I couldn’t catch all of the words in the verses. I like the feel of this a lot. You matched the melancholy theme with a chord progression and melody that supports it well. I... Read More

Dick Plunk gave feedback on All or Nothing

Sarah,  Love it. Very commercial in my opinion. If I heard it right, it’s verse - chorus - verse - chorus - bridge - chorus, which is a very traditional (and Nashville like) structure, so I think you are good. I love the concept and think you have... Read More