Joined: June 7, 2013
Dick Likes: 50 Songs
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Long Gone/ Same Old Story
Kevin - cool song. I really love your phrasing with the syncopation and pauses. I also think your dynamics are really good - soft to loud and back. NSAI would tell you that your title should be your hook, which for this song seems to be “Same Old Story, Different... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Freddie's Foot Fetish
Dennis, Thanks for the feedback. It was fun to write.
Dick Plunk gave feedback on The Color of You
Amanda (and others), Here they are: Color of You Had our little routine just your mom and me Come home and eat turn on the TV Living half speed Lounging around - two potatoes on a couch Nothing going down just a big empty house Day in and day out ... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on The Color of You
Thanks, Sarah. I’m not sure who it has been pitched to. One of the co writers is doing the pitching. Actually, he is part of a group of writers who work with Steven(?) Sharp, who is a songplugger. I’ve been to Nashville many times, mainly for Tin Pan... Read More
Dick Plunk gave feedback on Right by You
You really have a great sense for melody. I Look forward to hearing more of your material. The chorus on this really soars. My only critique (and this is something I hear a lot at critiques that I attend) is to look for more interesting rhymes. Rhymes like “day” and “... Read More