Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Take this pain away

I like your voice! And I love the style of this song too, with a kind of “rock” edge to it, just my kind of thing

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Life Was Fantastic With You

Sorry for your loss :( On the song, fantastic voice and sound, and I do love that opening line “There was no song I could find so I thought I would write mine” I know constructive criticism should have things to improve but I don’t have ideas there. Only thing... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know (Version 2)

80s English, jazzy, bluesy and smokey room spy movie sure works for me! Yes rhyming was different in this one, and I am usually very “traditional” in my rhyming. Here the rhymes are only in odd places, no idea why the song took me that way! Yep there is always... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know

Thanks Lisa! I did rework it a bit - that he’s been through this before, done some begging and pleading, things ain’t working, so this time he’s just preparing and is off realising that pleading again will do no good - well I hope anyway I changed... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know

Oooh this is fascinating, ty! I never get discouraged, except when I don’t like my own work, which does happen now and then I hope others join in, as I super interested in how people view the character! Would it make any difference if this was a woman singing,... Read More