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Take this pain away

Tylar Moe

January 29, 2018

Genre: Christian

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Was tired of not writing what was truly on my heart

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5 Responses


Kevin Fox

I Like it Good Job Fellow Song writer ..Good Message ...Seems like everything is there structure wise…..ROCK ON LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY

January 30, 2018

Andrea Bergman

I like it to. Good Job.

January 30, 2018

Tylar Moe

Thanks so much Kevin and Andrea that means alot!

January 30, 2018

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Tommy Grimes III

I like your voice! And I love the style of this song too, with a kind of “rock” edge to it, just my kind of thing smile

February 24, 2018

Tylar Moe

thank you sir!!! I so appreciate it

February 24, 2018

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Take this pain away

Written by Tylar Moe

Verse1

Seems like every song that I try to sing is another closed door to an empty dream. And this song in my head keeps trying to find you.

Pre-chorus

There's a fork in the road tell me which way to go I can see you there. There's a sign up ahead tells me this way is dead I still need you Lord!

Chorus

Cause I'm calling, calling, Lord I'm calling.

Help me today, I'm on my way.

And I'm falling, falling Lord I'm falling come take this pain away, cause I'm falling to you!

Verse2

The enemy's here tangled up in my sin he's keeping me down doesn't want me to win. But there's a better way out there than this road I'm taking.

Pre-chorus

There's a fork in the road tell me which way to go I can see you there. There's a sign up ahead tells me this way is dead I still need you Lord.

Chorus

Cause I'm calling, calling Lord I'm calling. Help me today I'm on my way. And I'm falling, falling Lord I'm falling come take this pain away cause  I'm falling to you! (Repeat) Take this pain away cause I'm falling  to you!

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Kevin Fox

I Like it Good Job Fellow Song writer ..Good Message ...Seems like everything is there structure wise…..ROCK ON LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY

January 30, 2018

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Andrea Bergman

I like it to. Good Job.

January 30, 2018

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Tylar Moe

Thanks so much Kevin and Andrea that means alot!

January 30, 2018

1

Tommy Grimes III

I like your voice! And I love the style of this song too, with a kind of “rock” edge to it, just my kind of thing smile

February 24, 2018

0

Tylar Moe

thank you sir!!! I so appreciate it

February 24, 2018


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