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I like your voice! And I love the style of this song too, with a kind of “rock” edge to it, just my kind of thing
February 24, 2018
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Verse1
Seems like every song that I try to sing is another closed door to an empty dream. And this song in my head keeps trying to find you.
Pre-chorus
There's a fork in the road tell me which way to go I can see you there. There's a sign up ahead tells me this way is dead I still need you Lord!
Chorus
Cause I'm calling, calling, Lord I'm calling.
Help me today, I'm on my way.
And I'm falling, falling Lord I'm falling come take this pain away, cause I'm falling to you!
Verse2
The enemy's here tangled up in my sin he's keeping me down doesn't want me to win. But there's a better way out there than this road I'm taking.
Pre-chorus
There's a fork in the road tell me which way to go I can see you there. There's a sign up ahead tells me this way is dead I still need you Lord.
Chorus
Cause I'm calling, calling Lord I'm calling. Help me today I'm on my way. And I'm falling, falling Lord I'm falling come take this pain away cause I'm falling to you! (Repeat) Take this pain away cause I'm falling to you!
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I Like it Good Job Fellow Song writer ..Good Message ...Seems like everything is there structure wise…..ROCK ON LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY
January 30, 2018
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I like your voice! And I love the style of this song too, with a kind of “rock” edge to it, just my kind of thing
February 24, 2018
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Kevin Fox
I Like it Good Job Fellow Song writer ..Good Message ...Seems like everything is there structure wise…..ROCK ON LIFES A SONG ENJOY THE MELODY
January 30, 2018