Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on The Things That I Do

Thanks Evan! Great to know that the “things that he does” are nice and clear and seem kinda believable for how a guy might handle a breakup! Good advice too on the “copy or ten” line as well, ty! This one may well see itself getting some rework (see next... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Legs Like Ginger Rogers

Well, I got all the references, but I am older (not AS old as I would have seen those actors and actresses as their movies came out haha, 50)... but I think those names are timeless. Can’t say I even watch those movies, but I am for sure aware of... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Family Tree

Note to self, don’t use smileys as they don’t show up! : )

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Family Tree

I love the idea, and I love the line “must be something romantic in those leaves” I did get sidetracked by “JLH loves GRP” as I was busy trying to figure out who that might be, which pulled me out of things a little… it felt a bit like an... Read More

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Audition

Ha, I really like this idea, and I love the wordplay about it all in the chorus! Rather like Frank said, I would love to have the metaphor and some clever wording come in somewhere in verse 1 (but that might just be me, as I do like witty words with... Read More