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June 25, 2020

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on The Weight of Water

Hey Bob, Thanks for checking the demo and your feedback. My co-writer Pete is an accomplished jazz musician and he picked up on the abstract associative nature of the lyric nicely. This is just the main idea and I hope it should fill nicely when properly recorded with a band... Read More

June 16, 2020

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on Reverie

A beautiful job, Bob!

April 23, 2020

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on TIME STOPPED

I also have a good feel about it. Like the upbeat tune. Lyric is a bit ambiguous about the reason for the separation and that is probably good because the original story is truly sad. I think the best line is “the clock keeps tickin’ but time has stopped.” It’... Read More

April 23, 2020

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on THIS JUST AIN’T GONNA WORK OUT

A lovely ballad with a timeless quality both in the music and the lyric so I think it can easily be done in a variety of styles. Nice, restrained production with a classic feel and what a great vocal! The most amazing thing for me is the way Ray sang... Read More

April 23, 2020

Jackson Lucas gave feedback on EVERYDAY

Hi Ellie, Thanks for sharing. This is a very sweet song with a very wide appeal. Great use of the old trick to put an upbeat melody on a sad lyric. The result, to me, is quite uplifting. My personal choices will likely be different on the title (I’d... Read More

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