Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Down That Road

Hey Matt!  I think your song is okay, but there’s nothing that jumps out and grabs me.  Nothing that makes me want to listen to it again.  I think it’s because there’s not a lot of difference between the verses and the chorus. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Cadillac

While the song has an edgy, laid-back sound, I was lost.  I don’t get the whole hearse/Cadillac theme, as most hearses are Cadillacs!  Maybe something along the lines of “We were riding in the wrong Cadillac, we took the hearse instead of the convertible”. Keep writing! ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Grind

I like the song and the overall feeling.  Lyrically, I think the song would be better if the verses were written in first person rather than third.  “I wake up in the morning, I go to work at nine” gives more connection to the listener. In the chorus, “... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Sneak That Peek

Thanks for the feedback Amber.  This song is in the rewrite process and hope to have the updated version shortly, if I can make time for it.  Too many other projects going on… Phillip

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Take Me Away

I like the vibe of the song, but have to agree with a lot of what Sean said above.  It’s kind of inferred in the song, but nowhere do you actually say why you want out of town.  Don’t leave too much for the listener to... Read More