Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Sorry I Ain't Sorry Anymore

The title/hook is a little catchy, but I don’t believe your theme will fly.  Why does somebody want to listen to a song about a self-centered guy who’s dumping his girl?  I’ve written a couple of songs like this.  When I show them... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Backstage

I dig it!  I can imagine it with a full band and a couple of lead guitar licks thrown in.  A few suggestions though… Since it is a party song, I’d consider changing the title to “Party Like We’re Backstage”.  This would also reinforce the... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Good Company

I get what you’re saying in the song, but… do you really want to call someone special, your soulmate, the love of your life, simply “good company”?  It feels negative and degrading to me. On the plus side, I like the music.  It’s got a SoCal... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Dreams

Hi Amber!  I kind of dig this one.  It has an old school feel, like late 60’s psychedelic stuff (think White Rabbit).  It’s like your thoughts are all over the place with every section, but in a song about dreams, it fits right together for me. ... Read More

Phillip Lemmonds gave feedback on Hard Act to Follow

I haven’t listened to the song yet, but reading the lyrics, there’s a few things that jump out. I think in V1 “what my heart felt like” should be “what my heart feels like”.  In V2, the “faded memories” phrase is cliche these days.  See if... Read More