Nigel Parry gave feedback on Time's Not On Our Side (live)

Nice chorus hook and good guitar. The rhythm of the words in the first line or two doesn’t quite match the song - while that’s ok in a song as a whole it does make the start feel a little muddled. Good song, thanks for sharing.

Nigel Parry gave feedback on The Water's Way

The melody for the verse needs a look I think. The chorus starts well, but the halted third line seems to stop the flow in its tracks. Whether it needs a bridge partly depends on how it will be performed. probably does solo, with a band, instruments, harmonies a bridge... Read More

Nigel Parry gave feedback on I Will Come for You

Nice song. Good beginning and melody. Nice tempo. Not sure about the ‘oooo’s - but perhaps you have more musicians joining in in your head. Maybe change to and elongated ‘I’?

Nigel Parry gave feedback on Keep Dreaming

I agree with Carlos that the lyrics need some work - and there are lots of them. Also, the chorus needs to stand out more (people don;t often listen to lyrics to start with, so it all becomes a stream of words). Suggest the chorus might break away from... Read More

Nigel Parry gave feedback on Love You, Bro

Nice song. Might be worth getting in touch with missing persons campaign organisations and offering them the song.