It's easy to blame time for things, I suppose...
Nice chorus hook and good guitar. The rhythm of the words in the first line or two doesn’t quite match the song - while that’s ok in a song as a whole it does make the start feel a little muddled.
Good song, thanks for sharing.
July 23, 2015
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Really like this song. The chord sequence is mournful and beautiful. Great voice and I like the fact that your (Norwich?) accent comes through a little ....it’s not quite as strong as say listening to a Billy Bragg song..(who I also like a lot by the way) but you can certainly here it.
The only criticism is that (as with the first reviewer) I think its possibly slightly long….Maybe 45 secs or so shorter could make the idea more concise….and would leave everyone wanting more and needing to hear it again. But great song!
November 05, 2016
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Nice guitar in this, Love it! Immediately was drawn. Catchy for sure. A song i’d play on repeat a good deal. I’d love to see the lyrics and follow along. My only first impression in regards to feedback is the solo/musical break may have been just a bit long.
April 12, 2015
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Nice chorus hook and good guitar. The rhythm of the words in the first line or two doesn’t quite match the song - while that’s ok in a song as a whole it does make the start feel a little muddled.
Good song, thanks for sharing.
July 23, 2015
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Really like this song. The chord sequence is mournful and beautiful. Great voice and I like the fact that your (Norwich?) accent comes through a little ....it’s not quite as strong as say listening to a Billy Bragg song..(who I also like a lot by the way) but you can certainly here it.
The only criticism is that (as with the first reviewer) I think its possibly slightly long….Maybe 45 secs or so shorter could make the idea more concise….and would leave everyone wanting more and needing to hear it again. But great song!
November 05, 2016
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Dennis Field
Nice guitar in this, Love it! Immediately was drawn. Catchy for sure. A song i’d play on repeat a good deal. I’d love to see the lyrics and follow along. My only first impression in regards to feedback is the solo/musical break may have been just a bit long.
April 12, 2015