It's about being there for the ones you love.
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Hi Charlie. I really like the song’s message and melody. I especially like how it soars in the bridge. I’m undecided if I think the “ooo’s” phrasing should be a little shorter and the “I will come for you” phrasing should be a little longer. But I like the song nevertheless. Good job!
July 11, 2015
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Nice song. Good beginning and melody. Nice tempo.
Not sure about the ‘oooo’s - but perhaps you have more musicians joining in in your head. Maybe change to and elongated ‘I’?
July 16, 2015
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© April 24, 2015 Charlie Katt • www.charliekatt.com
Verse 1
3 AM, can't close your eyes, you're tired, beat and blue
Call my phone just call my name, call me to your rescue
(‘cause) Oooooh-ooooh oooooh I will come for you
Verse 2
We're no teachers, we're no healers, we're no supermen
But we feel and closeness heals. When all you need's a friend
Oooooh-ooooh oooooh I will come for you
Bridge
We get scared sometimes staying in the lines
When we want to paint our own skies
But it all comes down to how we spend our lives
And I choose to spend all of mine... with the ones I love
Verse 3
If you need me I'll come running no matter where or what
‘Cause most of what we need from friends is simply showing up
(So) Oooooh-ooooh oooooh I will come for you
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Hi Charlie. I really like the song’s message and melody. I especially like how it soars in the bridge. I’m undecided if I think the “ooo’s” phrasing should be a little shorter and the “I will come for you” phrasing should be a little longer. But I like the song nevertheless. Good job!
July 11, 2015
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Nice song. Good beginning and melody. Nice tempo.
Not sure about the ‘oooo’s - but perhaps you have more musicians joining in in your head. Maybe change to and elongated ‘I’?
July 16, 2015
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Robert Markham
Wonderful message, melody and lyrics. Well done!
May 15, 2015