Adam Tock gave feedback on The Safer

Hey Dick, Thanks so much for the critique. You are probably right in expecting more of the verses to rhyme in some fashion. I’m sure you’re not alone there. I may write an alternate version of the song where I adjust the verses for a friendlier rhyme scheme. ... Read More

Adam Tock gave feedback on Take Me Away

Hey Joey, thanks for the extensive critique. You are quite right about the song being personally specific. I hadn’t even considered that. If I’m going to post a song for the masses to listen to, why not post one they can also relate to? I should be taking... Read More

Adam Tock gave feedback on Hard Cider

Jeff is right about setting the bar really high. I hope to hear much more of this since it is a pretty rare sound you got here. A really good convergence of sound and lyric.

Adam Tock gave feedback on Transatlantic

I love your voice in this one - so calming. Two things: First, I think you could really throw power into this one between your second and third verse by adding a bridge with some alternate instruments jumping in here (increased dynamics on the piano with an alternate progression/maybe... Read More

Adam Tock gave feedback on Let It Be Amazing

Hey Jamie, this song’s got a lot going for it. The only thing I’d say to help it out even more is to maybe add a bridge where you’re introducing new chords and/or dynamics. As I scan different chunks of the song, I am able to... Read More