Songwriting Pro: Helping Songwriters Turn Pro.

Join Songwriting Pro Today!

Write like a pro, do business like a pro & connect to the pros. Join the Songwriting Pro community today!

Adam Tock's avatar

Adam Tock

March 21, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Marry You

Very beautiful voice and good accompaniment. I’ll have to listen a few more times to find something to criticize… Good work!

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Boys vs. Girls

I think if you were to turn down the reverb/delay on the vocals a little bit, the lyrics would be much easier to understand. I had a hard time getting a feel for the song since I wasn’t entirely sure what was being said a lot of the... Read More

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Suffocator (revised)

Vocals sound great -  very smooth. I found the accompanying melody a bit bland, however. I don’t think there was enough in the musical side of this song to keep me listening after a first swipe. It’s not that it’s a boring song - the melody... Read More

March 19, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Western Sun

Hey Emily, I like the melody you’ve set up with your voice. The volume of your guitar kind of hinders my ability to hear the lyrics very well, though. I think you could achieve so much more motion in this song if you play with dynamics a little bit.... Read More

March 17, 2014

Adam Tock gave feedback on Girl’s Trip

Hey Nancy, I wish you had some lyrics to accompany this too. I could definitely see someone like Susan Tedeschi singing over this. One thing I would adjust/remove is that saxophone(?) riff you have jumping in. I’ve always been weary of adding software-woodwinds/brass. There just isn’t... Read More

Welcome back!

Username or Email:

Password:

×

Share this Frettie profile with others.

Like this songwriter? Share their music and profile with your friends, fans and fellow songwriters.

×

Purchase A Song Review from Adam.


Whoops!

Sorry about that, but you can't purchase a Song Review from yourself.

×