Joined: May 10, 2025
Robert Likes: 34 Songs
Robert Boog gave feedback on Grateful
Okay I listened to the song and think it could be improved by getting rid of “hell”. Maybe change it to something more positive? He’s in hell missing his girl, I get it but then it doesn’t match with the hope he finds. “I got awared” on the... Read More
Robert Boog gave feedback on The Songs We Wrote That Summer
Cute song.. for some reason I wanted to get to the chorus a touch sooner.. but maybe that’s just me
Robert Boog gave feedback on Burned CD
I really liked this song, was thinking that maybe using “mp3” in it might strengthen it a lil? just my .02 worth
Robert Boog gave feedback on Lost Lovers
Okay I listened to all three of your songs and I think this one is the best. You’ve got a good tone. My advice would be to rewrite it but make it about something else. Like what if you were the son of a father who worked at a... Read More