Robert Boog gave feedback on Under These Lights

Congrats on the song. It’s one that parents can relate to. Having said that, it’s a little confusing because in the beginning of the song it seemed like the football season was just starting and then at the end of the song it seemed like the season had... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on Leavin Bandera

Liked this song. Sorta feel like I’ve heard the melody before but that’s okay…to improve it I think you should lose the “too”. I think it’s stronger “I’m leaving Bandera and I’m leaving you.” Just my .02

Robert Boog gave feedback on Lost Lovers

Okay I listened to all three of your songs and I think this one is the best. You’ve got a good tone. My advice would be to rewrite it but make it about something else. Like what if you were the son of a father who worked at a... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on Grateful

Okay I listened to the song and think it could be improved by getting rid of “hell”. Maybe change it to something more positive? He’s in hell missing his girl, I get it but then it doesn’t match with the hope he finds. “I got awared” on the... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on The Songs We Wrote That Summer

Cute song.. for some reason I wanted to get to the chorus a touch sooner.. but maybe that’s just me