Joined: May 10, 2025
Robert Likes: 34 Songs
Robert Boog gave feedback on Two Rights Are Wrong
I like this song, but I think you need to work on the second verse..not sure what a Zebco is.. also. i think it’s usually the woman who asks “where is this going” but maybe that’s just me
Robert Boog gave feedback on A King Without A Country- choir
Well done and with a choir too!
Robert Boog gave feedback on Song about life moving on
If you’re looking for a line how about: “One more chance to misbehave” And/or “One more prayer I never prayed” Or “one more time to act brave”
Robert Boog gave feedback on Invisible: You Don't See Me
i like it but i think you should add a bridge with a bit of anger..just my 02.