Robert Boog gave feedback on Hard Workin’ Bourbon

Love the line about heartbreak owning the place. The idea of using bourbon as his only reliable companion, is clever. But he seems too much of a victim, a man stuck in the middle of his hurt, so maybe embrace the metaphor even more so we see bourbon driving or... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on One On Me (The Fortune Teller)

“Put one on me” usually refers to a kiss, right? But there’s some emotional distance between the two and it seems like he wants to reconnect and she is more hesitant. I think you need a line that pulls things together, or explains things like “love ain’t magic,... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on California English History

Hey in California English, “right now” means sometime today, “in a minute” means sometime this week, and “I’m five minutes away” means you just left the house and will be here in a couple of hours. Otherwise I loved it.

Robert Boog gave feedback on Down On Bourbon - (In the Campfire Round collection)

At first, I thought “cheap” referred to the bartender. But then after reading the lyrics, I realized that you were talking about the bourbon. Cheap bourbon. that being said, maybe change that line a little bit? My suggestion get rid of the cheap bourbon and “She’s a no-limit pouring... Read More

Robert Boog gave feedback on Always

Thanks for responding. I’m thinking that someone like Bey would have her own people vet it and most likely would wanna change it My next song will hafta be with your voice in mind Shane.