They are a loving couple, he struggles with the past, but they keep loving each other
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February 26, 2026
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February 26, 2026
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V1
He's so close to me, but so far away,
a kind, gentle, loving soul
But the broken child within him,
still takes a bitter toll
So I sit here in the stillness,
searching for a path to take
Just staring at my cup of tea,
waiting for the calm to break
CH
No he never ever hits me,
But leaves a trail of debris
Scars on the land of my heart
Still lovin' through the dark
So I just have to follow,
through every height and hollow,
wherever the winds may blow.....
My man, he hides a tornado
V2
I can tell a storm is brewing,
by the coldness in the air
An eerie kind of feeling,
I know it cos I've been there
My hands shake as the clouds gather
Lightnin' flashing in his eyes
I know for us it's dangerous,
but we're gonna get out alive
CH (Repeat)
Bridge (musical)
CH (2nd half repeat)
OUTRO
.......He hides a tornado
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The title, cover and lyrics match Tornado but the mp3 is a song about a spider-man.
February 25, 2026
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Oh whoops. Thanks for letting me know Robert. I will try and sort that out. ????♀️
February 26, 2026
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Oh whoops. Thanks for letting me know Robert. I will try and sort that out. ????♀️
February 26, 2026
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Robert Boog
The title, cover and lyrics match Tornado but the mp3 is a song about a spider-man.
February 25, 2026
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