Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on The Music Tree

Thanks for listening and for the thoughtful review. I do want the last chorus/verse to have impact so I will take another look at it.

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Poets In Our Sleep

I like this one the best of all yours I have listened to probably because it has more structure and rhyme than some of the others and I am old fashioned. I think a cello accompanyment would go nicely or even a harmonica in the distance with some reverb on... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Second Hand Smoke

I like this. Very witty word play and good imagery. I especially like the surprise butt reference. Well done!

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on With Her

Randy, Like Dennis said, you have some really nice lines in this song and the subject is one that far too many people will have sympathy with. I am not crazy about the “Yea, Yes, ........etc” and would rather have a short intro of strings leading into a very emotional... Read More

Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Recently Unmarried Man

I recently changed the title to “Recently Unmarried Man”. I’m sure it will be a hit now!