Joined: January 1, 2014
Benny Likes: 29 Songs
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on A Soft Place To Land
Good harmonies. I thought the word “plan” was a little overused and might look for a substitute word. It would be good to find something that does not rhyme with land wherever you can. It would really help if you could post the lyrics!
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on Old Cowboy
I love the spaghetti western sound! Some of the lines have too many syllables and seem rushed. Someone pointed out to me that I could reduce the number of a’s, an’s and the’s and improve my flow. Also it would be great if you could add the... Read More
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on A Hard Lesson Learned
Waiting for lyrics! First impression is positive. Good hook. Nice contrast in the melody of the bridge. You have a good voice for country!
Benny Pitsinger gave feedback on The Music Tree
Thanks Brian! Hope you can get it to work.